https://vimeo.com/165420968
After the feedback I got yesterday I went through and adjusted the timing of the annoyed huff at the beginning to make it slower. I also exaggerated the slumped and pulled his shoulder more up as he breathed and pushed his body more when he let our the breather. I fell it looks much better.
Letter Box -
https://vimeo.com/165424003
I took the feedback and made sure I pushed the body and the hip more so it looked like he was searching in his pocket. I also made him look down which I feel has really improved the animation and made it look much better and get across what I wanted.
I feel I do need to work on pushing the body more to get the right shape, because at the moment I do it enough.
Shock -
https://vimeo.com/165433573
The feedback for this one was to off set the eye squint, with the body and the hand going down. I have tried to do this and fell it looks better, but I have struggled constantly with this reaction and I don't think I have completely got across what I wanted to.
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